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@@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ what git knows about the files in the repository.
 	no changes added to commit (use "git add" and/or "git commit -a")
 
 First "git status" tells us that the current branch is "master". This
-means that the master branch is what will be updatea when we create a
+means that the master branch is what will be updated when we create a
 new commit.
 
 Note: In git a branch is a very simple notion---it's simply a name
@@ -625,10 +625,11 @@ do this.
 
 #### 2.7.1 Introducing yourself to git
 
-Before we run "git commit" though, we should introduce ourself to git.
-Git records your name and address with each change that you commit,
-(as both author and committer unless you tell it otherwise), so that
-you and others will later be able to tell who made each change.
+Before you run "git commit" though, you should introduce yourself to
+git.  Git records your name and email address with each change that
+you commit, (as both author and committer unless you tell it
+otherwise), so that you and others will later be able to tell who made
+each change.
 
 Git tries to automatically figure out a sensible name and address to
 attribute to both author and committer if you haven't explicitly told