X-Git-Url: https://git.notmuchmail.org/git?a=blobdiff_plain;f=tour.mdwn;h=e9e02776d86cddd7b8a19c9bd8815303584cfc4c;hb=5bbd7299aa73ba64a701912203c84c733697efcb;hp=2b908b3ee53be27947d21cbbf1182665c469dc79;hpb=d43fda595056cbaa704c0be939b2315204c3c946;p=hgbook-git

diff --git a/tour.mdwn b/tour.mdwn
index 2b908b3..e9e0277 100644
--- a/tour.mdwn
+++ b/tour.mdwn
@@ -32,12 +32,12 @@ Changes made by Carl include the following:
 The source of this modified version can be obtained via git:
 
 	git clone git://cworth.org/git/hgbook-git
+
 or
-	git clone http://cworth.org/git/hgbook-git
 
-and can be browsed online:
+	git clone http://cworth.org/git/hgbook-git
 
-    http://git.cworth.org/git/hgbook-git
+and can be [browsed online](http://git.cworth.org/git/hgbook-git)
 
 ### 2.1  Installing git on your system
 
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ with git, meaning GNU Interactive Tools).
 
   * Ubuntu
 
-	apt-get install git
+	apt-get install git-core
 
 #### 2.1.2  Mac OS X
 
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ installers. These include GitMe, a package to install the entire
 development environment necessary to work on improving the msysgit
 port of git, and WinGit, a package for installing just git itself
 without the development environment, (still in Alpha as of September
-2008).
+2007).
 
 ### 2.2  Getting started
 
@@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ in the current branch, "HEAD~", refers to the previous commit, and
 
 Another useful syntax is .. which can be used to specify a range of
 commits. So "origin..master" specifies everything that has been
-committed to master since it derived from origin.
+committed to master since it diverged from origin.
 
 #### 2.4.3  Viewing specific revisions