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authorKonrad Scorciapino <konrad@scorciapino.com>2011-03-23 16:27:50 -0300
committerKonrad Scorciapino <konrad@scorciapino.com>2011-03-23 16:27:50 -0300
commitcc8370490738411c7a33fc0f0c2a318e8b5da897 (patch)
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better phrasing
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@@ -189,11 +189,11 @@ Among the available browsers, w3m seems to do a better job converting
the html, and if you have the w3m emacs package, you can use it,
instead of the w3m-standalone, and thus preserve the text formatting.
-But if the rendering fails for one reason or another, (or is perhaps
-inadequate if you really need to see the graphical presentation of the
-HTML message), it can be useful to display the message in an external
-viewer, such as a web browser. Here's a little script that Keith
-Packard wrote, which he calls `view-html`:
+But if the rendering fails for one reason or another, or if you really
+need to see the graphical presentation of the HTML message, it can be
+useful to display the message in an external viewer, such as a web
+browser. Here's a little script that Keith Packard wrote, which he
+calls `view-html`:
#!/bin/sh
dir=`mktemp -d`